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Geplaatst op 22 januari 2012 - 19:54

Ik heb onlangs nog een essay geschreven, zouden jullie kunnen kijken en mijn fouten kunnen laten zien?

Hier komt ie dan:

Why we should learn english in a young stage.

England, almost everyone has heard about it. It is the place where the use of english has begun. Now in the year of 2012 it is a worldwide spoken language; at universities, in commercials and at big companies it is the prevailing language. To keep yourself in touch with society we need to teach english to our children in a early stage.

We need to learn and use english because it is a worldwide spoken language. As we can see at universities, it is a must to comprehend english. The books you get at universities are mostly written in english, it will be very hard to read those books if you do not understand it. In hospitals and municipal buildings(= gemeentelijke gebouwen?) there is also need of people who are able to use english. If a foreign guy shows up in your hospital you have to communicate with him to get the maximum out of the treatments. You can reach that if you both speak the same language,in this case, english.

Furthermore, learning a second or a third language while you are young will stimulate your brain activities. It is scientifically proven that how more languages children learn, how smarter they become when they are older. And it is easier to learn something when you are young instead of old. The children also learn it with other children which stimulates children to learn it and use it in real life with their friends.

But some say you could deteriote your native language.
That is not true as I said it is scientifically proven that learning a new language stimulates your brain which will make you smarter and also improves your native language.

So we need to learn english early, because it is a worldwide spoken language and you definitely need it for communication. It also stimulates your brain by increasing it's activities. You are more able to learn something new when you are young instead of old. But some say you could worsen your native language. That is not true if you look at the points which I made.

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Geplaatst op 23 januari 2012 - 17:32

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Geplaatst op 23 januari 2012 - 20:00

*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*
Why we should learn English at a young stage.
*English wordt altijd met een hoofdletter geschreven, at a stage is hier de correcte uitdrukking*
England, almost everyone has heard about it. It is the place where the use of English has begun. Now in the year 2012 it is a worldwide spoken language; at universities, in commercials and at big companies it is the prevailing language. To keep yourself in touch with society we need to teach English to our children at a early stage.

We need to learn and use English because it is a worldwide spoken language. As we can see at universities, it is a must to comprehend English. The books you get at universities are mostly written in English, it will be very hard to read those books if you do not understand it. At hospitals and municipal offices there is also a need of people who are able to use English. If a foreign guy shows up at your hospital you have to communicate with him to get the maximum out of the treatments. You can reach that if you both speak the same language, in this case English.

Furthermore, learning a second or a third language while you are young will stimulate your brain activities. It is scientifically proven that the more languages children learn, the smarter they become when they are older. And it is easier to learn something when you are young instead of being old. The children also learn it with other children which stimulates children to learn it and use it in real life with their friends.

But some say you could deteriorate your native language.
That is not true. As I said it is scientifically proven that learning a new language stimulates your brain, which will make you smarter and also improves your native language.

So we need to learn English early, because it is a worldwide spoken language and you definitely need it for communication. It also stimulates your brain by increasing its activities.
*it's is een samentrekking van it is, its duidt de bezitsvorm van de derde persoon enkelvoud aan*
You are more able to learn something new when you are young instead of old. But some say you could worsen your native language. That is not true if you look at the points which I made.

Veranderd door mathreak, 23 januari 2012 - 20:02

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Geplaatst op 28 januari 2012 - 22:57

Als native speaker heb ik er ook naar gekeken nu ik weer even online kan zijn.

Why we should learn English at an early age.

England, almost everyone has heard about it. It is the place where the use of English began. Now, in the year of 2012, it is a language that is spoken worldwide; at universities, in commercials and in major companies it is the prevailing language. To remain in touch with society, we need to teach English to our children at an early age.

We need to learn and use English because it is a worldwide spoken language (zie correctie in de 1e alinea). As we can see at universities, understanding English is a requirement. The books you get at universities are mostly written in English, it will be very hard to read those books if you do not understand them. In hospitals and municipal buildings, there is also need of people who are able to use English. If a foreign person shows up in your hospital you must be able to communicate with him to get the maximum out of the treatments. You can reach that if you both speak the same language, in this case, English.

Furthermore, learning a second or a third language while you are young will stimulate your brain activities. It is scientifically proven that the more languages children learn, the smarter they become when they are older. And it is easier to learn something when you are young instead of old. The Children also learn it with other children which stimulates them to learn it and use it in real life with their friends.

But some say you could deteriorate your native language.
That is not true, as I said it, is scientifically proven that learning a new language stimulates your brain which will make you smarter and also improves your native language.

So we need to learn English early, because it is a worldwide spoken language (zie boven)and you definitely need it for communication. It also stimulates your brain by increasing its activities. You are more able to learn something new when you are young instead of old. But some say you could worsen your native language. That is not true if you look at the points which I made.
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