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Engelse tekst verbeteren op fouten.
Wil iemand eens grondig bekijken en eventueel verbeteren wat ik nu al heb?(dit is nog niet mijn volledige tekst.)
Alvast bedankt.
Since tigers, lions, leopards (and every other species of cat) like to spend so much time grooming themselves, the volunteers of the Big Cat Rescue decided to show them what they look like. The result was hilarious: by holding a mirror in front of their head, the vigorous animals were astonished and became stunned. Some of them even ran off because they became anxious by their reflection. Maybe they saw the other cat as a threat? Without doubt, its clear they are deceived by optical illusion and cant make a difference between their image and reality. But do they possess other skills humans (dont) have?
First of all, were going to deal with human behaviour that some animals display: language/communication, teaching/learning, dexterity and cunning.
Most animals can communicate with each other (and with humans). They arent able to produce the variety of sounds we can, as they dont have the same vocal equipment. However, research has shown that animals can use body - and learn symbolic language, apes, for instance. On the other hand, specific species use other means: sounds, scents, colours, seismic trebling, etc. Its remarkable animals can communicate with almost all senses.
As I previously mentioned, animals can learn abilities. For example: Peter Gabriel
(a famous artist who once sang Shock the Monkey) began working with the Atlantic Language Research Center and is now teaching a troupe of bonobo apes to play keyboards. The apes understand about 4,000 English words and recognize 400 pictograms, according to Gabriel. They also have a keen sense of rhythm and melody. Furthermore, they also are able to teach things to their own congeners. Im not talking about the native instincts the parents need to activate in their offspring, but the learning process that requires no training at all. One ape that didnt participated from the beginning of this project, learned to play the keys (and some songs) from his friends. Do humans underestimate the intelligence of primates?
In addition, lots of animals master fine motoric skills; dexterity (more and better than humans in my opinion). Most of you have already seen a squirrel hopping to a distant branch without missing a beat. While we are amazed, its just the ordinary life of a squirrel. The answer lies in the evolution theory of Darwin: most likely, the squirrel has a prehistoric ancestor. Therefore, this means it took millions of years to develop those skills. We must conclude were just underdeveloped at the moment, if we compare our progress to other species.
Second, exploring the subject animal behavior (many) humans display could also be worth our while. Lets look into mating procedures and perception.
Alvast bedankt.
Since tigers, lions, leopards (and every other species of cat) like to spend so much time grooming themselves, the volunteers of the Big Cat Rescue decided to show them what they look like. The result was hilarious: by holding a mirror in front of their head, the vigorous animals were astonished and became stunned. Some of them even ran off because they became anxious by their reflection. Maybe they saw the other cat as a threat? Without doubt, its clear they are deceived by optical illusion and cant make a difference between their image and reality. But do they possess other skills humans (dont) have?
First of all, were going to deal with human behaviour that some animals display: language/communication, teaching/learning, dexterity and cunning.
Most animals can communicate with each other (and with humans). They arent able to produce the variety of sounds we can, as they dont have the same vocal equipment. However, research has shown that animals can use body - and learn symbolic language, apes, for instance. On the other hand, specific species use other means: sounds, scents, colours, seismic trebling, etc. Its remarkable animals can communicate with almost all senses.
As I previously mentioned, animals can learn abilities. For example: Peter Gabriel
(a famous artist who once sang Shock the Monkey) began working with the Atlantic Language Research Center and is now teaching a troupe of bonobo apes to play keyboards. The apes understand about 4,000 English words and recognize 400 pictograms, according to Gabriel. They also have a keen sense of rhythm and melody. Furthermore, they also are able to teach things to their own congeners. Im not talking about the native instincts the parents need to activate in their offspring, but the learning process that requires no training at all. One ape that didnt participated from the beginning of this project, learned to play the keys (and some songs) from his friends. Do humans underestimate the intelligence of primates?
In addition, lots of animals master fine motoric skills; dexterity (more and better than humans in my opinion). Most of you have already seen a squirrel hopping to a distant branch without missing a beat. While we are amazed, its just the ordinary life of a squirrel. The answer lies in the evolution theory of Darwin: most likely, the squirrel has a prehistoric ancestor. Therefore, this means it took millions of years to develop those skills. We must conclude were just underdeveloped at the moment, if we compare our progress to other species.
Second, exploring the subject animal behavior (many) humans display could also be worth our while. Lets look into mating procedures and perception.
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Re: Engelse tekst verbeteren op fouten.
Hier zijn enkele kleine verbeteringen. [...]Wil iemand eens grondig bekijken en eventueel verbeteren wat ik nu al heb?(dit is nog niet mijn volledige tekst.)
Since tigers, lions, leopards (and every other species of cat) like to spend so much time grooming themselves, the volunteers of the Big Cat Rescue decided to show them what they look like. The result was hilarious: by holding a mirror in front of their [heads], the vigorous animals were astonished and became stunned. Some of them even ran off because they became anxious [about] their reflection. Maybe they saw the other cat as a threat? Without doubt, its clear they are deceived by optical illusion and cant [see] a difference between their image and reality. But do they possess other skills humans (dont) have?
First of all, were going to deal with human behaviour that some animals display: language/communication, teaching/learning, dexterity and cunning.
Most animals can communicate with each other (and with humans). They arent able to produce the variety of sounds we can, as they dont have the same vocal equipment. However, research has shown that animals can use body language] - and learn symbolic language [(apes, for instance)]. On the other hand, specific species use other means: sounds, scents, colours, seismic trebling, etc. Its remarkable [how] animals can communicate with almost all senses.
As I previously mentioned, animals can learn abilities. For example: Peter Gabriel
(a famous artist who once sang Shock the Monkey) began working with the Atlantic Language Research Center and is now teaching a troupe of bonobo apes to play keyboards. The apes understand about 4,000 English words and recognize 400 pictograms, according to Gabriel. They also have a keen sense of rhythm and melody. Furthermore, they also are able to teach things to their own congeners. Im not talking about the native instincts the parents need to activate in their offspring, but the learning process that requires no training at all. One ape that didnt participated from the beginning of this project, learned to play the keys (and some songs) from his friends. Do humans underestimate the intelligence of primates?
In addition, lots of animals master fine [motor] skills; dexterity (more and better than humans[,] in my opinion). Most of you have already seen a squirrel [jumping] to a distant branch without missing a beat. While we are amazed, its just the ordinary life of a squirrel. The answer lies in [Darwin's] evolution theory: most likely, the squirrel has a prehistoric ancestor. Therefore, this means it took millions of years to develop those skills. We must conclude were just underdeveloped at the moment, if we compare our progress to other species.
Second, exploring the subject animal behavior (many) humans display could also be worth our while. Lets look into mating procedures and perception.