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fysicachemiewiskunde

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Geplaatst op 27 maart 2012 - 19:00

Hallo,
Zou er iemand dat tekstje willen verbeteren, schrijffouten zijn niet zo belangrijk want het is een spreekoefening.


We are two inventors and work for Apple. The apple campus is in CarlifoniŽ. This day, we present our new invention, the Ipen. It is a compact fountain pen with a built-in Ipod. You can it put in your pen case. It was an idea of a lot of students. When you sit in the study or a lesson, you can listen to music. With the Ipen can you listen everywhere. Buy it now, we have two types of Ipens. The first type is the Ipen shuffle with memory of 2GB, the price is 70 dollars. Next year, you can also buy the Ipen phone, with a memory of 16GB and then you can phone with your Ipen.

A fountain pen is a nib pen. Some people still like to use a fountain pen because it has a smooth flow of ink when you write.
There are 3 main fountain pen parts visible from the outside. The first part is the cap, the second is the nip and the third part is the barrel. The pen is made of plastic and metal. The nib of the pen is in metal, The cap is the part, you must remove to expose the nib. When you have remove the cap, you see the nib. The barrel is the cover of your pen. When you remove the barrel, you see the ink reservoir. The dip pen contains a reservoir with ink. You must fill the reservoir with ink manually. There exist a lot of ink reservoirs. This pen has a cartridge, you need to replace old cartridge with new cartridges.

Alvast bedankt!
Cťdric

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Geplaatst op 27 maart 2012 - 21:40

Correcties in rood hieronder:

We are two inventors and are working for Apple. The apple campus is located in California. Today, we are presenting our new invention, the Ipen. It is a compact fountain pen with a built-in Ipod. You can it put in your pen case. It was an idea of a lot of students. When you are in your study or during a lesson, you can listen to music. With the Ipen can you listen everywhere. Buy it now, we have two types of Ipens. The first type is the Ipen shuffle with a 2 GB memory, the price is 70 dollars. Next year, you will also be able to buy the Ipen phone, with a memory of 16GB and then you can phone with your Ipen.

A fountain pen is a nib pen. Some people still like to use a fountain pen because the ink flows smoothly when you are writing.
There are 3 main parts of the fountain pen that are visible from the outside. The first part is the cap, the second the nib and the third is the barrel. The pen is made from plastic and metal. The nib of the pen is metal, the cap is the part that you must remove to expose the nib. When you have removed the cap, you see the nib. The barrel is the cover of your pen. When you remove the barrel, you see the ink reservoir. A dip pen contains a reservoir with ink. You must manually fill the reservoir with ink. There are many types of ink reservoirs. This pen has a cartridge; you need to replace old cartridge with new cartridges.


Kijk goed wat ik heb veranderd en probeer op te zoeken waarom of het veranderd is.
Hoe minder kennis, des te onwrikbaarder het oordeel.





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